>~ ~ Endless Desire ‘n’ Broken Promises ~ ~

Tuesday, September 9, 2009 . 12 comments . Posted in General

>




My brain shower thoughts like the rain

When this mind set its journey to the past


Alone, avid and vivid they become known


Red lights in the moonlight and cold gust


Oh so far away from fall and down we go


Alone we go; along they come, among all


When they gaze at me and phrase on me


A line that carved on my heart thrust into


And my soul is bleeding, weeping for light


A Light for right as truth stays bright, white


And my psyche comes back to the present


Oh the world seems to be old, wild, weird


Wired all the way since start to the end


These frames been moved and crushed


Dreams been thrown, desires been piled


Oh wait; ah hold on, life must go on… on…


12 Comments

  1. nagini

    >i read the poem more than once..and these verses..

    And my soul is bleeding, weeping for light
    A Light for right as truth stays bright, white
    And my psyche comes back to the present
    Oh the world seems to be old, wild, weird…

    i felt my heartbeat was heavy like i was feeling the burden of the past,a wish to be free frm the past,guess we all wish so…

    Ur words have the power to make people feel….

    πŸ™‚

    Reply
  2. N J

    >hehe πŸ™‚ Now that was a surprise πŸ™‚ Thanx Nags… I could feel it here πŸ™‚

    Reply
  3. LIFE: A Collection Of Beautiful Memories!

    >i read it i dunno how many times… and every tym i cud feel each and every emotion… the conflicts tat are always govin on with in us… those confusions… those questions which could never be answered… those situations tat render us helpless…. those memories when recollected and the feeling tat tym wont ever come back!!
    and yes then realizing that life isnt over yet… it still is a mystery and holds something gud for us… ya tat hope which never dies!
    life must go on and on…
    coz we are all fyters…not quitters….
    just everything!!!

    very well written!

    cheers..
    Megha

    Reply
  4. N J

    >i guess i got a lot many thoughts from your comment… well, that was a brilliant take on the poem… impressed. oh well.. thank u…

    Reply
  5. swati

    >profound!!!
    i could connect to it completely since my lat post had a lot to do with these hidden deisres..
    n yes life still goes on..
    loved the way u wrote it.
    Keep writing!
    take care!

    Reply
  6. N J

    >thank u swati… πŸ™‚

    Reply
  7. PULKIT

    >U have a beautiful blog bro!
    I wanted to follow it, pls add the followers widget!

    Reply
  8. N J

    >it's already there in the right hand side bro :)thanx

    Reply
  9. Escapist

    >Oh beautiful verses……the light can overcome once you give it a way to tingle down and show the long and clear life long…..

    Jolliesss:-)

    Reply
  10. N J

    >:) πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    Reply
  11. Diva

    >The end is what intrigued me most… Evn though thats the reality(life goes on…no matter what you say or what you do), very few accept the fact or try to come to terms with it… Liked that about the poem.. Nice once!

    Reply
  12. N J

    >Yeh… rightly said. In a way, you have taken the best out of it… thanx πŸ™‚

    Reply

Leave a Comment