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Saturday, September 9, 2009 . 14 comments . Posted in General

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That sky knows it all, from the start to end

In her eyes I see sparkling stars, charming

When these strings pitch a song to our past

Oh, the same dark blue sky in yellow shade

Ah, all we know is about reflections of life

All we feel is what’s been given and taken

And we all rest under the same sky, blue sky

Sigh, they are proud of this fragile globe,

And these darkness clouds around us soon

Alas, we all have nothing but six feet to brag

If and only if humanity had lone meaning,

I would have painted the skies in yellow…

14 Comments

  1. Kay

    >beautiful…if only each could have their own to paint, or do we?…

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  2. Anju

    >hey tats a very lovely poem… wish i could paint the sky in ma colors but its just splendid the way it is…

    brilliantly written

    Regards
    Yasmin

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  3. TheBeez

    >This is really beautiful. You've captured what most of us think at times, but just can't find the words to say.

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  4. amit

    >that was really nicely written!

    Keep penning,
    Amit

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  5. O.F.C.J.

    >Kind of somber but not depressing.

    O.F.C.J.

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  6. Amy

    >Love it!! Really got me thinking, and that's what I love about poems haha. :]

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  7. a tint of mist

    >"the same sky, blue sky.." Loved them..
    "I would have painted the skies in yellow…" good idea..:-)
    yellow skies and blue leaves!!

    Made a wonderful read..

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  8. Escapist

    >Thats very pouring…….painting the sky the way you want is always fun…….

    jollieess:-)

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  9. N J

    >@ Kay – thanx… upon us all a lill rain must fall… yeh πŸ™‚

    @ Anju – Spread the color… Paint it the way you prefer πŸ™‚

    @ TheBeez – thanx πŸ™‚ glad that i'm not the only one who think about it.

    @ amit – thanx πŸ™‚

    @ O.F.C.G – thanx πŸ™‚

    @ Amy – thanx πŸ™‚ poems do make us think, i second you πŸ™‚

    @a tint of mist – Yeh… you just made imagine about yellow sky and blue leaves πŸ™‚ thanx

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  10. N J

    >@ Escapist – eh πŸ™‚ yeh… thanx a lot. I read your poems. beautiful i must say πŸ™‚

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  11. RdGarnet

    >This is beautiful. Well written. I love it. πŸ™‚

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  12. N J

    >thanx πŸ™‚

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  13. Shibani

    >well written πŸ™‚

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  14. N J

    >thanx πŸ™‚

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