>When 3/\O7 hurts LOVE…

Saturday, October 10, 2009 . 20 comments . Posted in General

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It’s a pretty sunshine that bursts out through the hole

While I’m lying down in here, waiting for rains to fall

These pretty floras getting dried and I’m waving arms

For rains to fall, wet these leaves and breathe them life 

It’s a pretty sky and those birds flying for their nest

While I’m lying down in here, hearing their pensive prayers

There are pretty branches, touching the deep blue sky

And I see no place for them to rest, in peace and harmony 

Now, I see a dark wall blocking my vision, passion

And I run towards it, to break the wall, crack its head

Oh, I climb the wall to reach its top to tap its wit

But I see a word scribbled out in blood, thick blood

Now, I’m hanging upside down, gripping on to the wall

Reading it as 3/\O7, for love is all we need…

20 Comments

  1. Anju

    >awwwwwwww tats such a lovely poem… simply superb… excellent creativity…. 🙂 just loved it 🙂

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  2. Giuliana

    >NJ, See you thought you were happy in that dark hole but once your vision was cloudy you realized that there was more out there and you wanted to see it all, now you are dangling upside down, what are you going to do now that you have seen the truth? It cannot be ignored.

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  3. Natalia

    >Love your poem! Who sacraficed their lives for love? Well, I can think of one person. That's how I see the blood on the wall.

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  4. тнƨ [ƨcняɛι]

    >really wonderful and amazing! XD

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  5. Katie Walters

    >Your writing is wonderfully inspiring, as always….

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  6. Sorcerer

    >AWesome!! lovely and fantastic lines!!

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  7. ~Nisha~

    >Hmmm… hope you are doing good… the poem is good as usual… and piercing too… 🙂 but i really do hope i will see a poem that smiles… i hope you get wht i mean.. hope to see a bright face soon… 🙂 nice poem btw…l loved the last 2 lines…
    ~Nisha~

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  8. N J

    >Anju

    thanx 🙂

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  9. N J

    >Giul

    I'm still taking time for sunrays to guide me through the narrow way to see the hidden treasure kept for me! hehe 🙂

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  10. N J

    >Nats

    Glad that you like it… well said 'n' do come back to read more 🙂

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  11. N J

    >тнƨ [ƨcняɛι]

    thanx 🙂

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  12. N J

    >Katie

    thanx 🙂

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  13. N J

    >Sorcerer

    thanx 🙂

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  14. N J

    >Sis

    Glad to see you in here… hope you had a great time in India… i'm doing good… thanx 🙂

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  15. Mike

    >Beautiful work NJ. I'm particularly fond of the images you use, they're quite arresting. You should consider submitting to this blog I help maintain for creative writers, http://picturewortha.blogspot.com/.

    Great work!

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  16. N J

    >Mike

    Thanx buddy 🙂 Well, i've joined that page. Hope to write out there soon. Cheers 🙂

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  17. Keshi

    >Love never hurts NJ…people do.

    Keshi.

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  18. N J

    >Well said! Thanx 🙂

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  19. LIFE: A Collection Of Beautiful Memories!

    >i surely can relate to every bit f it….. everything around u is beautiful…everyone's busy in their own lives… in their own happiness…tat they fail to notice u… ur emotions…ur tears…. u don't want anyone to sympathize with u… but yes to hug u.. caress u… support u… nurture u!!!

    love u unconditionally….

    i wait for someone to come to me..
    don't know why cant anyone see..
    me… my sorrow…and my pain…
    i know there's no gain…
    so lemme end it now myself…
    lemme go and die again!!!

    vei true…
    keep goin!
    Megha

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  20. N J

    >I liked your comment. Mature thoughts! Well, nobody wants to sympathize with us… Nor do we want them to pretend that they care but a gentle smile to tell us that they care for us… Hugs Megha!

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