>A dawn to go…

Thursday, October 10, 2009 . 16 comments . Posted in General

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Here she stays awake

untouched, unseen

she weeps, it counts

Oh bad, that’s sad

she hears the clock

ticking twelfth hour

for his hour has come

to wave his arms,

and fall from the gallows pole

when the moon fades away

while the clouds cover its ray

he’ll be away, she will be alone

16 Comments

  1. Bhupesh

    >Awesome one dude!!!!

    Keep them coming

    BHupesh

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  2. Sorcerer

    >great one

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  3. LIFE: A Collection Of Beautiful Memories!

    >reminds me of the lines i once wrote duh in hindi…

    bahut sambhaal kar rakhi hain teri yaadein…
    wo pal.. wo lamhe…
    pyasi aankhen tarasta hua mann…
    aaj bhi rula jati hai mere dil ko…
    teri har baat…
    wo aakhri mulaquat!!

    great one…
    keep govin!!

    Megha

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  4. Kay

    >oh my! that picture, those words… as if you've had a nightmare and never wake

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  5. Anju

    >awesome bro!!! really nice 🙂 wonderful design as well 🙂

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  6. N J

    >Bhupesh

    Thank you bro 🙂

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  7. N J

    >Sorcerer

    Thank you 🙂

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  8. N J

    >Megha

    Sweet lines there… Like i said in the earlier post, you think too deep and it's the best about a true artist. Cheers!

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  9. N J

    >Kay

    thanx 🙂 i like this picture a lot… yeah! it's like a nightmare! 🙂

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  10. Anonymous

    >Mind blowing!!!!

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  11. [email protected]!t@*

    >nice blog!!!!!!!
    inspired me!!!!!!!!!;)

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  12. Giuliana

    >Sounds like war for him and angst for her. But it still sounds like love….
    I love your new blog design!!!! It's really great Sunshine…where's the Sunshine in this dark place? Hmmm…just outside the front door. Thought you fooled everyone huh? Not me, Sweetpea!

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  13. N J

    >[email protected]!t@*

    Thank You 🙂

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  14. N J

    >hehe 🙂 Sweets i didn't fool anyone… glad that you could find the sunshine just outside the front door 🙂 Well, it's about love, anguish, war…

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  15. Giuliana

    >Ha, I knew it! Anyways, great work from my fav author!!! As usual! 🙂

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  16. N J

    >>Hugs< 🙂

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