>Life in a terrarium…

Tuesday, November 11, 2009 . 12 comments . Posted in General

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Sweet, soft yet mellow
Fib, fall, uh, oh, so fast
River in a dry terrarium
Misty clouds coat around
Filthy creeps crawl in, Ah
You reap what you sow,
In a paddy field full of gold
Some picked the stone, sand
And I left the green far alone
Are you through the patch?
There are twenty seven pebbles
Few men rushed to lay hands
Some died and the rest were killed
Oh, don’t let the news reach home
Their sweet home, wives all alone
Row the boat, chase the twilight
Eat the joy, rush in a flicker
And comfort them, oh devil…
You know, that’s sad…
In a muddy land they plot huts
Sudden rush of the west breeze
Oh, ah, sigh… it blew them away…

12 Comments

  1. Anju

    >Hey tats a lovely poem… loved the way its been composed… not to forget i really really loved the picture….. wat to go bro..

    regards
    anju

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  2. ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫

    >whoa..that's cool..though its a lil too hard to understand..haha..but i get the meaning now..just requires a lil thinking..great!

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  3. Escapist

    >Oh very beautiful thoughts coming out of a free mind…

    Joliiees:-|)

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  4. Jaunty anima

    >It's been long since I visited..n u've written consistently well!!So this one's another feather in ur cap!!
    Cheers!!

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  5. N J

    >Anju

    Thanx 🙂

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  6. N J

    >Ayu

    Hope that I made sense to you 🙂 Thanx

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  7. N J

    >Joliiees

    Thanx 🙂

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  8. N J

    >Jaunty

    That was really sweet of you. Thanx 🙂

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  9. Escapist

    >Thats really very amazing piece of your poems…

    Jolliieess:)

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  10. subu.ps

    >Stumbled upon here from somewhere, read through 3 of ur latest poems, and u deserve a pat on the back for these work and all the best for continuing this good work 🙂

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  11. N J

    >Jolliees

    Thanx again 🙂

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  12. N J

    >Subu

    Thanx! I feel honored 🙂

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