>goodbye to say hello…

Friday, February 2, 2010 . 6 comments . Posted in General

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Spirits in my heart crawl
                  &
Evokes the bygone tale
                  To
Seize the scenes behind
                  Where
Friends forge to win pride
                  &
Breaks the terrain I owned
                  For
Time smiled at my hurt heart
                  &
Sighed in tears to fill emptiness
                  Oh
Days ran dry & nights died away
                  Ah
I sang a song counting on time
                  If
It heard the same song in tears
                  To
Soothe my broken wings in shape
                  &
To hurl the scenes afar, forever…   

6 Comments

  1. ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫

    >hey that's so sad poem but i love sad poems..:P

    anyway…i like your style of posting the poem..you're so nice in depicting your emotions..

    keep posting~!

    (P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

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  2. chitz

    >beautiful but sad…may i ask,y dis melancholy in ur poems?

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  3. N J

    >Ayu – Thanx a lot 🙂

    Chitz – Thanx a lot 🙂

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  4. Tongue Trip

    >to hurl the scenes afar, forever…if only it could happen. acute despondency, this one needs needs to heal.

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  5. N J

    >Tongue Trip – Thanx a lot 🙂

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  6. Sweety

    Dumstruck!

    Reply

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