>An ancient prayer…

Tuesday, February 2, 2010 . 12 comments . Posted in General

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The gust fell upon the ferryboat
For it naively sank to the moon, &
His love stood awake of his return, &
She sang a song to the blue skies

O Lord, Guard my guardian
For his craft is full of Gold
Send him a guardian angel
For us to live in love forever

The dark holes poured packed
For its fiery wrecked the yacht, &
the gale rushed upon the waves, &
pushed him away from the craft

O Lord, Guard my guardian
For his craft is full of Gold…
Make his sail smooth & sane
For us to live in eternal ecstasy

And whilst she recites the mantra,
ferry full of Gold sank to the west, &
Crossed the silver sea in vain, &
Went astray with all the glitzy gold…


12 Comments

  1. ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫

    >nice poem..kinda dark huh..? i love the figurative speech you used..

    and the ending is nice..pretty ironic of what the woman was praying for..maybe coz she's so selfish abut the gold..:3

    (P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

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  2. Adisha

    >Wow… First time I'm visiting here and I'm impressed. Very well written and kind of grey … subjective to person's vision… nice one !

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  3. akanksha

    >Dark verses there!Amazing piece! 🙂

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  4. vinitha

    >words cant express, how brilliantly is this piece =) love ur style of writing!!

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  5. N J

    >Ayu – Thanx for being around 🙂 Appreciate it.

    Adisha – Thanx 🙂 Keep penning.

    Akanksha – Thanx 🙂 Well, I usually write dark n blues stuff.

    Vinitha – Thanx 🙂 Just read your poem. Neat stuff.

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  6. Escapist

    >Great ,
    m here after long time…..

    Was really women selfish……?

    Jolliieess:)

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  7. N J

    >Glad to see you around… Well, i guess she was… thanx 🙂

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  8. Devil Incarnate...

    >Beautiful… sad & mystic at the same time..
    loved ur way of writing…
    n by the way.. 1st time here…

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  9. N J

    >Thank you 🙂 Hope to see you again in here. Cheers!

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  10. subu.ps

    >Another good poem here. You have very good collection of your creations. Any plans of publishing it

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  11. N J

    >Subu – Thanx 🙂 Hopefully by the end of this year.

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  12. Sweety

    You pen down everything straight from your heart:) I get hell a lot of inspiration and encouragement reading your poems:)

    Keep penning always:)

    Love
    sweets

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